It's Monday and I am joining Susan at Stony River for
Microfiction Monday
Susan provides a photo and you write a story of 140 letters (including punctuation) or less.
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This weeks photo
She stood ... frozen in time.
The building ... the clock ...
just as in her dreams.
This is where she always awoke.
What lay ahead?
16 comments:
I've been in that position. Knew I've been there before, but never got too far.
I wonder what does happen next,
Good short story beginning.
Ah, the beginning of a great mystery! And, yes, been there, done that, too! Hope you have a wonderful week!
Sylvia
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Very eerie! Makes me want to read more.
Whatever she's there to do must be important.
I agree. The picture has a dream-like quality.
Oh, Vicki, I love those recurring dreams! Your's sounds like the one I used to have. They never would come to a conclusion.
But now they have stopped. I hope your heroine's doesn't stop coming.
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I hope only the best for her...
Sounds like a great thriller in the making! :O)
Probably another day, another dollar...
This has big potential for a story!
I like the suspense with your take!
I love this. Great hook to a fabulous novel! Have a great week, Vicki!
♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥
Oooooh, goosebumps. Great story.
That house looks something like a house I once lived in. Now all these years later, I wonder what it's history was. Being a teenager at the time, I had other things on my mind.
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